15/10/09 Crit

1) Be aware of how we transit from 3D to 2D and vice versa. Make sure both elements integrate well together.

2) Get rid of Dreamworks guy! Replace with something else. A lost thing perhaps? My suggestion is the cow on the moon. Muahahaha. MOOOOOO~~

3) Clouds-to-Moon transition is confusing. We decided on just falling straight down right?

4) Make mock-ups of all transitions! Make boards, test out on AE etc. Just try!

5) During sea scene, maintain close-up of the Chris and sock (“… once more be in their company.”) as the sock changes to the cup. Then can cut to the transition.

6) A fair number of changes I need to make to the narration.

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