of 17 sep 09 critque :)

Sea scene:

• Camera too bouncy when he hits the water
• horizon line the reference for christopher
• tumbling cut, make sure when the cut occurs, the head is near where the head is in the close up shot.

Clouds scene:

• after he lands on the random cloud, cut to more medium shot to establish he’s on the cloud.
• remove bounce on shot with fish cloud
• another 20 frames for jack in a box cloud

recording of voice!

–joan

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