10/09/2009 Critique

Model: Move hairline back for eyebrows.

Animatic – Kitchen:

1. don’t do the bouncy camera
2. no need to track mom (mom walking is too much, distracts from the question)
   • have Chris ask the question, then have the camera turn to the right when he looks up to the mother who comes in from the right
3. maintain similar downward angle for all shots (keep perspective consistent)

Animatic – Sea (falling to sea):

1. make sure camera’s always delayed w.r.t to Chris’ movements
2. because the camera is delayed, tilt it downwards towards the sea as he splashes, then tilt it to horizontal when it’s in the sea
3. keep camera at the same speed and stay with Chris

Animatic – Sea (porthole):

1. have Chris already at the porthole before you cut to the through-the-porthole shot. Then just have Chris move forward towards the porthole.
2. let Chris have a moment to see and soak in the wonderment of the jack-in-the-boxes before they all come at him
3. for the tumble, have Chris tumble away from the camera (he’s currently too close to the camera)

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